sentence expansion

                                                                       Ki ora

we are learning to expand our sentences. we had to write a little story including Who, where and why. I really like how it turn out. I am really prod of it. I hope you like it just as much as I do.

we are learning expand our sentence with more detail

 Oscar cried

when:At 6:05

where:at the park

why:because he was getting bullied by charlie

At 6:05 Oscar cried at the park because he was getting bullied by Charlie.

they had an argument

When: 5:30 on Tuesday

Where: at the beach

Why: because Oscar accidentally knocked over the sand castle

At 5:30 on Tuesday Oscar was at the beach with Hugo and Oscar accidentally knocked over the sandcastle that they were making.