Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Tuesday, April 21, 2020
Can i Cuddle the Moon
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Hi Bella
ReplyDeleteVery clear point about what happened in your story. Well done on figuring out what the moral of the story was.
Miss Gill.
I think that story is very cute bella you did a great job
ReplyDeleteHi Bella,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your summary of the story. Imagine trying to cuddle all those things, but especially a python. To scary.
Have you ever tried and tried and never given up on something?
Hi Bells
ReplyDeleteGreat summary of the story! It was great to see you understood that the story had a message.
Did this blog post have a picture as the link does not seem to work?
yes but it didn't show up
ReplyDeleteHello Bella,
ReplyDeleteAmazing job! I love the sound of the story I wish I could read it it would be so fun to read by the sound of it.